#eLitRPG : Ежи Тумановский о повести «Иллюзорная орхидея»

Иллюзорная орхидея, Ирис Юми
Не понравилось:
— По-детски трогательное произведение тяжело читается среди прочих обычных работ.
— Мне кажется, что в тексте допущены все возможные виды ошибок, какие только встречаются у новичков. Получилась в своем роде эталонная энциклопедия типовых ошибок.

— Образно, ярко, мимимишно.
— Автор четко понимает, что хочет сказать. Т.е. это, конечно, кладезь ошибок, но это по смыслу  цельное произведение.

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